Comments | kerijane: Broken Bones and Mended Hearts (Part 2/2)

kerijane

Broken Bones and Mended Hearts (Part 2/2)

Apr 11, 2009 19:48

Comments 27

seftiri April 12 2009, 00:37:24 UTC

::SQUEES::

Yay! I was hoping that we'd get part 2 today! Perfect! Perfection!

You know what my favorite part was? This:

The only person who had influence over Nataila’s happiness… was Natalia herself.

And she’d been fighting off and flinging away happiness with both hands. Out of fear.

Now if only the Natalia on our TVs would realize that too! :)

It was lovely and beautiful and tender and it all started because of the Jellybean. Yay Jellybean!

Thank you for sharing!

kerijane April 12 2009, 00:47:53 UTC

Thank you so much for the kind words! I tried not to make the ending too terribly sappy, but alas, these two bring it out in me.

rebakathy April 12 2009, 00:54:56 UTC

I was very much looking forward to the second part and I wasn't dissapointed. Very nice!

kerijane April 12 2009, 01:02:11 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks.

vjb2006 April 12 2009, 01:07:02 UTC

Thanks for the fluffy ending - much better than the broken broken it began with :)

kerijane April 12 2009, 03:31:23 UTC

Thanks... I prefer my endings fluffy as well. :)

thebeaconowner April 12 2009, 01:16:55 UTC

loved it!

kerijane April 12 2009, 03:32:46 UTC

That's what I was going for, so yay!

akasarahsmom April 12 2009, 02:40:37 UTC

Excellent ending.

So sweet.

kerijane April 12 2009, 03:33:12 UTC

Thanks!