Broken Bones and Mended Hearts (Part 1/2)

Apr 08, 2009 23:45

Author: Kerisempai

Fandom: Guiding Light

Pairing: Olivia/Natalia

Rating: PG

Disclaimer:  I don’t own Guiding Light, although I hear it’s for sale… anyone want to chip in?

Summary: An accident with Emma puts things in perspective for both Natalia and Olivia.

Archiving: Just ask, I’ll say yes.

A/N: Thank you to my beautiful beta sauciloo.

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fic, guiding light, otalia

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bldy_destini April 9 2009, 05:50:04 UTC
That was beautiful. You hit every emotional cord perfectly. More please?

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kerijane April 11 2009, 11:46:59 UTC
Thank you so much. I've discovered that it's much easier to get into Natalia's head and heart lately. Who'd have ever though, lol!

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alexz6 April 9 2009, 06:59:13 UTC
Oh CRAP!!! You need to post the new part up really soon please?!!?!?!?!
This was SOO excellent. Natalia fighting the urge to run her girl. Her conversation with frank was pretty damn excellent all on it's own.
And i really especially loved how you wrote that last scene w the thank yous :D
i'm very much looking forward to the next piece!

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kerijane April 11 2009, 11:47:55 UTC
Thanks for the great comments! I'm so glad you're enjoying it.

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perpetualblyss April 9 2009, 07:26:29 UTC
Really fantastic. You've really caught the emotional tenor between these two. I can't wait for part 2.

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bronzeashtray April 9 2009, 08:29:29 UTC
Anne of Green Gables! Ah! Yay! I had SUCH a crush on Anne when I was young and so didn't even realize it. XD This fic is great, looking forward to more.

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ralst April 9 2009, 10:06:18 UTC
You stopped it there? Are you trying to kill me?

Lovely pacing, great characterisation and the sweetest of kisses. I'm very eager for more.

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