Broken Bones and Mended Hearts (Part 1/2)

Apr 08, 2009 23:45

Author: Kerisempai

Fandom: Guiding Light

Pairing: Olivia/Natalia

Rating: PG

Disclaimer:  I don’t own Guiding Light, although I hear it’s for sale… anyone want to chip in?

Summary: An accident with Emma puts things in perspective for both Natalia and Olivia.

Archiving: Just ask, I’ll say yes.

A/N: Thank you to my beautiful beta sauciloo.

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fic, guiding light, otalia

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Comments 37

nnnjtu April 9 2009, 04:16:44 UTC
Awww, that was beautiful.

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kerijane April 9 2009, 14:52:47 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

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runetraverse April 9 2009, 04:19:15 UTC
Oh, for the love of cripes! You've captured their relationship so perfectly, and Natalia's "conversation" with Frank made me squeak out loud. The whole 'feral' bit was made of win.

Of course, now I shall have to beg and give puppy eyes for more. xD Their actual relationship is driving me insane, so I need good fic like this to fill the gap between now and the 14th. (hence the "Headdesk" icon.)

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kerijane April 9 2009, 14:54:15 UTC
The lack of Otalia this week (other than the fabulous mirror scene) is what made me sit down and write a fic. These people are killing me.

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thebeaconowner April 9 2009, 04:19:36 UTC
loved it! the froggy pajamas were a nice touch. looking forward to part 2.

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kerijane April 9 2009, 14:54:50 UTC
Froggy pjs just seemed like something Emma would dig.

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vjb2006 April 9 2009, 04:37:58 UTC
This is great - I like how you've caught the steel hidden inside Natalia. Puhleeze can we have s'more?

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kerijane April 9 2009, 14:55:21 UTC
Thanks, I'm hoping to have part 2 posted by Saturday. :)

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seftiri April 9 2009, 04:41:33 UTC
The patronizing tone in Frank’s voice was the spark that set Natalia’s temper ablaze. “I’m sure that Olivia could, but the point Frank, is that she doesn’t have to. They’re mine to take care of. She and Emma are my family, and I want to be with them. Don’t fight me on this Frank, you’ll lose.” Natalia realized that she’d raised her voice, and quieted her next words. “They need me, and I’m sorry that you’re disappointed, but this is my choice. I’ll call you tomorrow, okay.”

Please could you go work for Guiding Light? I really, really need Natalia to say something like this to Olivia very, very soon.

I can't wait for more of this! Thanks!

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kerijane April 9 2009, 14:57:08 UTC
Don't I know it! I am so tired of Olivia looking on the verge of tears in every scene and Natalia looking like a deer caught in the headlights. Nat's a strong woman, and I tried to bring that back into focus. Thank you so much for you kind words.

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