An Exercise in Insanity: Part Two

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Comments

[dimeliora]

Holy crap that was beautiful.

Flawlessly executed, perfectly balanced between angst and joy, with characters that are so real and perfect they practically walk off the screen. Just amazing. Wow.

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omigosh, thank you for such a lovely, lovely comment! i always want to make my fics resonate with real emotion, so to hear you thought they did is just the perfect compliment. <3

[ayane42]

wow!! that was incredible!! i loved it!!

just wow!!! wow!!

ok, a little incoherent...only word is wow!! and love!!

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your incoherency makes me smile :) i'm so, so glad you liked it! thank you very much!

[willfia]

WOW! amazing story .

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you're too sweet :) thank you very much for reading and commenting!

[shenova]

That was good. I like the way things developed slowly and there was nothing creepy about it just two people who had strong feelings for each other and try to deign it but can't in the end. Lets hope they have a happy life together. Would love to read how things develop with the guys once Jared is in college.

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aw, thank you :) i am very, very happy that it didn't turn out creepy. i feared that it might in the writing process :) glad it worked for you!

[firesign10]

That was really great. The way the relationship developed, the way the story ended - all very thought-provoking and interesting. I so loved that ending - Jensen waiting outside, the sun, the future ahead. Just lovely.

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thank you so much :) i'm very happy you liked it!