Brigit's Flame, week 3, June

[keppiehed]

Title: Hell to Pay
Author: Keppiehed
Rating: R
Warnings: language, adult subject matter
Word Count: 4770 (sorry!)
Prompt: "For where we are is hell." This is a quote by Mephistopheles from Marlowe's play, “Faustus”.
A/N: Thank this week goes out to hbar for her patience in betaing this beast for me! And to anyone who reads all the way through to the end.

Comments

[meganeko_mausuu]

Oh man, that would be a horrible fate.

[keppiehed]

That was about as close a vision of Hell as I could conjure up. :D

[bardiphouka]

So devastatingly accurate,imho. I did like the song titles btw. But then, as usual, I liked all of it.

[keppiehed]

Well, I think accuracy is difficult to gauge, since it is mostly fantasy :D But thank you nonetheless.

[bardiphouka]

One does hear things from time to time.

[bluegerl]

D'you know - I REALLY enjoyed that! I really did. It seemed so lighthearted and jolly and a super way to spend eternity, bickering and swapping snarky comments with Adolf!! Mind you, I've just spent 27 years living with the Amoeba. So I know JUST WHAT SHE HAS GOTTEN HERSELF INTO - only hers is more amusing!!!

A wonderful view of where poor Seraphina was. It didn't matter whether it was there in the Gateway or in her new place...same thing, same old thing.... endlessly....Oh dear me.

Oh Keppie, I don't know where you found this in yourself, but...I hope it wasn't tooooooo from personal experience....??

I recognised it... my house was called Purgatory. Blue....XXXXXXX