Purest of Prose

May 25, 2012 16:19

Title: The Aerialist
Author: keppiehed
Word Count: 500
Prompt: “rigging”
A/N: Written for Purestofprose. This is exactly 500 words, as per the rules for the flash fiction contest.

“I said no.” Anna clenched her fists to hide the trembling in her fingers. “I'm tired. Go up without me. I'll be ready tomorrow ( Read more... )

flash fiction, entry: purest of prose, prompt: rigging

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rubyelf May 26 2012, 00:30:36 UTC
Simple but lovely little story... a bond between them demonstrated in just a few lines.

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hbart May 26 2012, 02:05:12 UTC
What, no raging angst? What a nice picture of the bond between siblings.

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meganeko_mausuu May 26 2012, 07:43:50 UTC
Now I'm curious. What happened that made her so afraid? And how will she do her first time going back up?

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j_flattermann May 26 2012, 08:57:11 UTC
What a lovely take on that prompt. Beautiful.

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