Brigit's Flame, December, week 1

Nov 29, 2011 12:52

Title: The Space Around Him
Author: Keppiehed
Rating: PG
Warnings: melodrama?
Word Count: 345
Prompt: “rocking”
A/N: Written for week #1 at Brigits_Flame.

Rocking )

flash fiction, prompt: rocking, entry: brigits flame december, week 1

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blacksheep_17 December 10 2011, 01:12:10 UTC
Oh, I love love love how it ended! I think you did a marvelous job describing how precious she is for him. I could feel the longing oozing out of the words. It's a beautiful sort of sadness. This may be the first of your works that I've read, but I already know I'm going to like the succeeding ones. :)

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keppiehed December 12 2011, 13:51:30 UTC
omg, what a lovely thing to say! Thank you so much for your kindness! I warn you, though, I am in the middle of a writing slump, so don't expect too much from me just now if you read anything else of mine. I think there's just something about December, blech!

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