Reverie

[keppiehed]

Title: Reverie
Author: keppiehed
Prompt: “hushing”
A/N: Written for Quills. I can't believe I dare to submit poetry

Comments

[starduchess]

Ah, very lyrical. Love the imagery.

Now a ray of light,
warmth where you do not want it.
An offering of food,
compassion where you do not need it.
A gentle touch of hand,
concern from where you do not expect it.
An open heart and listening ears
let tears fall when they overwhelm you.
Healing, in spite of it all....

[bardiphouka]

You should do it more often you know.

[bluegerl]

I Seconds Baardi!!! 'Moooore'!! claps hands and begs. So soft this one -- dreams fading, never felt....

[rubyelf]

Your poetry is lovely.

[hbart]

A girl reads a poem
written by her friend
who thinks that her poems are bad.
She is wrong.
Obviously.
It is clear to everyone
except the poet.
She is oblivious.