I'm absolutely terrible at giving reviews/critique... because generally all I can do is gush... and that's normally not that helpful, lol.
Though I did see one typo! You have "That felt goood" instead of "That felt good". I lol'd a little because I thought at first it was deliberate, then I figured it wasn't meant to be funny XD
Thank you! Sweet seems to be the general consensus, which is good as it's what I was looking for - that's one of the things I love about their relationship - it's actually not all angst!
I'm fine with gushing! Gushing is good, feel free to gush all you like!!!
And actually, you were right the first time - it's deliberate! Maybe I should have put in more o's...
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I'm absolutely terrible at giving reviews/critique... because generally all I can do is gush... and that's normally not that helpful, lol.
Though I did see one typo! You have "That felt goood" instead of "That felt good". I lol'd a little because I thought at first it was deliberate, then I figured it wasn't meant to be funny XD
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Sweet seems to be the general consensus, which is good as it's what I was looking for - that's one of the things I love about their relationship - it's actually not all angst!
I'm fine with gushing! Gushing is good, feel free to gush all you like!!!
And actually, you were right the first time - it's deliberate! Maybe I should have put in more o's...
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