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running_ahead June 5 2010, 02:14:57 UTC
Exceptional. Just read the whole thing, soup to nuts. Well, maybe we're at the second course now rather than nuts, or whatever. But utterly engaging.

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kennedysbitch June 5 2010, 04:01:26 UTC
There's a lot more to come. A *lot*, heh.

Thanks!

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djrach June 5 2010, 11:10:06 UTC
It hurt to read this, it really did.

Good job!

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kennedysbitch June 11 2010, 11:38:01 UTC
No pain, no gain, right?

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funkyshaz57 June 7 2010, 10:17:34 UTC
“And I don’t wanna break up with you.” The blonde woman didn’t break their gaze, but the sting of tears in her eyes made her blink several times. “I don’t want to lose you.” Her fingers traced soft patterns against her lover’s temple. “You’re the girl who wears her heart on her sleeve. Who’ll eat pizza in bed for a date…naked.” She smiled softly. “You’re the girl who stood up to her father and who fights for those she loves. You’re the girl who brought me chicken salad.” Arizona closed her eyes and leaned in to steal a slow, tender kiss. “You’re my girl.”

- That was the most beautifullest? (not a word lol) thing I've heard so far - It was so heart felt and lovely and then it all got shattered!!! I thought that they were going to find their way back to each other - I thought Ari would bend! I nearly cried when they finally really ended it!!!!

Great story excellent writing - But please don't let this be the end for this couple these two are made for each other - Like really they are!

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kennedysbitch June 11 2010, 11:39:54 UTC
They'll keep trying to convince themselves they don't belong together...but we'll see how that turns out.

Thanks for commenting, glad you're enjoying!

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rae714 July 6 2010, 08:34:01 UTC
WOW it's 4:30am and I can't stop reading! Fantastic!

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a_windsor January 27 2012, 19:52:00 UTC
Excuse me while I go cry in a corner....

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