Milestones (1/1)

[kennedysbitch]

Milestones (1/1)
Author: kennedysbitch
Beta: the former strandedinaber -- come back! :( we miss you…
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer

Author’s Note: This is a birthday fic prompt for englishstrawbie, who has edited billions of words for me over the years and who puts up with a lot of angsty writer feelings on a daily basis (not to mention a lot of excuses). She’s also the master of

Comments

[funkyshaz57]

This was all kinds of freaking awesome! You are Awesome!!!

I loved the humour, you are always so excellent at getting both Callie and Arizona as perfect as the show. I'm not sure many other writers can do a Canon Fic as well as you.

Arizona is a super lovely wife isn't she? Spoiling Callie like that!

I liked the talk of why Arizona doesn't celebrate her Birthday, I wish we actually knew the reason why, most likely does have something to do with her brother.

I laughed when they ganged up on Arizona in the patients room.

“I’m serious. If I so much as breathe the words ‘congratulations on being born this day seven-hundred years ago’, she gets mad at me.” - Cracked me up.

April and the flamingo's...I was kinda like...WTH, Kepner Kepner...always good for a laugh.

Callie had even snuck in a little birthday sex, disguised as regular sex with a touch of kink.

Now I know Arizona doesn't like birthday's but Birthday sex with Callie should be just a given!!!

Awesome stuff - Was super stoked to see something from you. Fantastically

[awesomegreys]

Oh my god!! This is so good, this is so great aaaaaaaaaand sexy!!!! oh so sexy!!!

Loved the funny mood mixed with the deep thoughts and explanation of Arizona's "issue" with her birthday celebration and I loved this explanation, so in character with Arizona and her backstory it's now my head canon.
Loved how both are perfectly in character with their way to comunicate while actually comunicating and so in character with their own reactions to the new information.

This is perfect happy birthday present!! Thank you for sharing it with all of us :)

[anonymous]

So I've already read this a bunch but I LOVE it :) You capture these two so perfecftly and reduce me to a big ol' pile o' mush. And I am convinced that Timothy has something to do with Arizona's dislike of her birthday, so I'm glad you explained that. But also that Callie convinced Arizona to let her celebrate just a little bit.

(strandedinaber)

[anonymous]

Also, I really like what you did with the final few sentences. You definitely fixed it :)

[sgafirenity]

I loved this. It was so cute. I really liked your explanation for why Arizona doesn't like her birthday. It made a whole lot of sense. :)

[dadaliketostada]

Absolutely loved this!!