Fault Lines (19/36)

[kennedysbitch]

Fault Lines

Chapter 19/36
Authors: Faith kennedysbitch & Kye kye9
Pairing: Callie/Arizona, Mark/Lexie
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer

Story Summary: Sequel to Choices. Callie and Arizona make the decision to move forward with their lives, but when a gradual series of events begin to snowball, Arizona tries desperately not to lose her grip on reality.

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Comments

[mc_maverick]

Hells yeah for the update and some more of the good ol sexy time. Wonder what happened in that shower, eh?

Lots of funny moments in here. But then we get to the seriousness that is the Colonel. I really hope everything works out, but hey, I'll still read if it doesn't. Can't wait to see what happens next.

[kennedysbitch]

Many, many things happened in that shower. Many things. ;)

Things are definitely coming to a head. Still planning on injecting some funny into the angst, though, make it a little more bearable for everyone.

Thanks again as always!

[roughian]

Funny and sexy Callie and Arizona are back. Yay! Welcome back, beauties! Totally missed this! I love your angst, I love it so, but this is just... sexy.

Though.. the Mexie was a littttle bit concerning. Just a little bit. With the... shirtless and the heart sinkin'. Won't it be fuckin' amazing whenever the hottie down the hall turns out to be a lesbian! Bahaha.

Um, sexy times are sexy. :) Very, very sexy. I really like the way you write their sexy times. It's really hot.

Please more, more more! :D:D:D

I shouldn't drink wine and comment on fics. I'm kind of an idiot.

[kennedysbitch]

They're fun when they're angsty, but they're even moreso when they're being cute and sexy. Writing a short bit of fluff was a nice change. (Someone told me even my fluff turns out angsty, which isn't always true...is it?)

Spoiler alert: McHottie isn't, but her roommate totally is, haha. We couldn't decide between a young Ali Larter or Carly Pope for the chick eyeing up Sloan and his nekkid chest. Both are very pretteh.

Hot is a good reaction. God forbid my smut ever turns into a "soaking hole" equivalent. *shiver* If it does, please shoot me. Seriously.

You should always drink wine when reading and commenting on fic. It's entertaining!

[neolithicdream]

'I love you,blue eyed girl'
aaaawwwww!
For some reason when one of them calles the other girl my heat always does a little flutter!
Loved this update, although I have to say I'm personally not a fan of Mark in this fic or the prequel...he tries to do the right thing but I find this Mark can be so mean and dismissive of Arizona....and I still blame him for the whole Carmen fiasco.(But I do love your Calzona and Lexie)

[kennedysbitch]

Hehe, yeah. Callie's a real cute sweet talker. <3

Mark is...Mark. He means well, and I hope to god he never comes off as bad as he did in the musical. His relationship with Arizona will become a thing pretty soon, both in a funny way and take a serious turn.

I hate what they've done to him on the show. I kinda despise him after his whole "You're nothing!" speech. Le sigh.

[neolithicdream]

That should have read "heart does a flutter" :)

[tox182]

HOLY HELL!!!

Not entirely sure how I missed this for so long but I just spent the last 4 days straight reading both of these stories. Beginning to end. And damn. It.Is.Awesome.

It's really quite something. Total emotional roller coaster. I laughed, cried, yelled at my laptop, and did happy dances with my laptop. And I think my roommate is more than a little scared now.

Seriously though. Well done. You've really captured the characters in an amazing way. Best stuff I've read in quite a while. Really. And now I'm a lil bummed that I can't just keep reading, so can't wait for an update!

[kennedysbitch]

Wow! That's a ton of reading in a short time, impressive. :) I'm glad you took the time to do so, that's kinda flattering, thank you.

I'm happy you enjoyed the emotional roller coaster from hell and didn't give up halfway through all the back-and-forth drama, haha. God knows there was enough of it.

Thanks again for taking the time to read and catch up. I'll do my best to update soonish when school lets up a little.