Brigits_Flame December Entry 02 - Chaos

[kenderlord]

Chaos.

Her apartment is always a huge mess. It used to bother me a whole lot, but I’ve been with Eris for, oh, eight months now. And it’s starting to grow on me. It all started because Tethys noticed how lonely I was. This was, oh - maybe a year ago? She said I looked depressive. Which is technically untrue. I was just washing dishes! And I

Comments

[quantumckat]

I really liked this entry. You did a great job describing the chaos of meeting someone new and establishing a relationship. Your descriptions are great. I especially liked the detail about the leaves in Eris's hair.

[intermezzo_poet]

Beautiful...

I loved this piece. I found it amazing that Hygieia found Eris attractive walking in, with leaves in her hair, disheveled... it was strangely charming, watching both of them compromise just a little, to be together.

This piece really struck me, for some reason. Maybe I'll come back, and recomment, when I'm feeling a bit more articulate, but I'm not so sure that will happen. Regardless, I loved this piece, and I have a feeling it will stay with me for a very long time.

Nice work.

[kenderlord]

Wow. Thank you very much!

I'm glad it struck you. I'm surprised Hygieia found her attractive, too.

-D