The Inner Monster Part 5: Chance

[kendayawind]

Comments

[dilovesyunjae]

hahahaha...so im thinking it ends well...since yunnie is bi...

[kendayawind]

Yes ^^ Though I left it open ended, they do end well :)
Thanks for reading and commenting~! ^^

[his_angelll]

OH YAY HE'S BI!!! XD
Waiting for the next update. Thanks for sharing ^^

[kendayawind]

Yup he's bi ;) Though I at first was going to make this a completely angst story, but once I told my friend she completely said no xD
Thanks for reading and commenting~! ^^

[debbris]

ahhhhhhhhh.

so he's bi? ceh. & all this while Jae is suffering on his own not knowing Yunho actually bats for two team.

a total waste indeed. :)

um. I like how Yunho is being so nonchalant about it. So Yunho-ish.

[kendayawind]

Nods* Jaejoong really went through a lot emotionally and Yunho just naturally brought it in. If only he knew~
Thanks for reading and commenting ^^

[ultamatempa]

hm.....i just want yunho to be so.....not oblivious! but jaejoong's not exactly forthcoming with his emotions either (not that he really had the opportunity). i duno how i feel about this, it's a bit confusing (not your writing, what i feel about it) but very realistic. my heart really bleeds for jae throughout the whole thing and i just wished he would do something about his situation. i can't really fault yunho for being oblivious, but it's really frustrating. as told in jae's bias, i would say that yunho's a pretty selfish friend, allotting only left-over girlfriend time to his proclaimed best friend. that just angers me (from personal experience) that he'd so something so hurtful all the time.

hopefully they don't keep going in the same circles now that the girl is out of the picture. sequel please?

[kendayawind]

I agree, and though I don't speak from romantic relationship wise, I have had some experience in other areas where you start worrying over those lines of being somewhat jealous and possessive of your relationships. And though you're torn inside of what to do, you're essentially forcing yourself to be alright with it all. And even that person's actions or words can affect you without them knowing, but it really isn't their fault.
This fic really was based on those emotions alone when I was thinking over what to write. They are basically both at fault for what they went through that if they don't understand each other, as you said, they keep going in circles lol.
As for a sequel, I'm not to sure lol. I have currently 14 one-shots in the works and 4 other series @.@ But I will think about it ^^.
Thanks for reading and commenting~!

[one_nee]

huaaaa... read all 5 chaps... oh, i hope now jae will found his happiness...
this is good, dearie, reading these i can understand jae's pain... buyt at least now they have another chance =)

[kendayawind]

I hope he does too, as I'm sure Yunho will soon enough come to his senses now lol.
I'm glad you thought so ^^. These two definitely deserve a chance with one another.
Thanks for reading and commenting~! ^^