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[kenakeri]

Kantor looked round at the scared little faces crammed in his corner of the Great Hall. Outside, the wind snarled its fury and the sea roared in response. The other adults were busy, making sure their refuge was safe against the storm, but with a missing arm and leg, he couldn’t do much more than ensure that the little ones didn’t get underfoot

Comments

[lrig_rorrim]

This was awesome fun - I love a good genesis story, and this one is definitely neat. I didn't see the twist at the end coming at all, but everything for it is right there in the text. Good stuff!

[kenakeri]

Thanks for reading and commenting :)

[eska818]

I'm with mirror girl, I love genesis stories. Well done with this :)

[kenakeri]

Thanks :)

[solstice_singer]

A very cool bit of mythology. I love different creation stories.

[itsjustc]

This isn't a subject I usually read or know very much about but I found it interesting x

[violaconspiracy]

This is well-crafted. It reminds me a great deal of the various myths I read when I took a class on worth mythology.