Comments | kenakeri: In Another Castle

kenakeri

Mar 30, 2014 21:07

She's late ( Read more... )

Comments 15

solstice_singer March 31 2014, 02:21:05 UTC

I hope they do bring his castle down around him. He sounds like an awful man.

similiesslip March 31 2014, 02:59:32 UTC

So sad :( Very creative though. Your writing is wonderful, as I find myself hoping they get away. Great job!

tonithegreat March 31 2014, 04:53:40 UTC

Wow, nice job spinning that much story in the number of words you used. A very different take on the topic from what I've read so far. I like it!

basric March 31 2014, 05:06:46 UTC

A wondrous tale that I hope has her father buried beneath the rubble of his castle.

lapis_lazuli615 March 31 2014, 06:17:35 UTC

oh, nicely done!