Comments | kellysparrow: "Would We All Dream The Same", Jack/Kate, g

kellysparrow

"Would We All Dream The Same", Jack/Kate, g

Jul 19, 2009 00:17

It's Luau again over at lostsquee and this year, I get to be a Queen :) It's my turn on Monday, but this also means that I have to contribute at least four times. Well, here's my first :)

Title; Would We All Dream The Same?
Characters; Jack/Kate
Rating; pg
Words; 415
Summary; (S1) Jack and Kate are still getting to know each other.
Disclaimer; I do not ( Read more... )

fic: lost, jack/kate, luau: 2009

Comments 12

lostpuffin July 19 2009, 04:20:33 UTC

This is pretty. Especially the first part. :)

kellysparrow July 19 2009, 08:59:21 UTC

Thank you! :)

_milz_ July 19 2009, 05:10:41 UTC

Anddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd I loved this.

I don't know why but I just love the thought of Jack and Kate sleeping together.

And so this was perfect.

Thank you.

kellysparrow July 19 2009, 09:00:15 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, I was a little insecure because I haven't written anything in a few months now, so thanks! :D

_milz_ July 19 2009, 16:46:38 UTC

Never EVER feel insecure. I love your writing.

kellysparrow July 19 2009, 21:37:44 UTC

You made me blush, but thanks! :) I mostly write because I really enjoy it, but it's good to know people like it too :)

dracke July 19 2009, 19:10:43 UTC

awesome *le sigh*
I miss this kind of jate,you know,them just smiling at one other.we saw it in the finale and then BANG!8 months of hiatus O_O crap!
great writing bb!

kellysparrow July 19 2009, 21:40:03 UTC

Me too, and I just started watching S1 again (I just finished watching my all time favourite episode "Tabula Rasa") and I really, really miss that - at the time - easy friendship they had and how they started to grow closer to one another. I'd like to see more of that in S6, scenes where you can see them together without being awkward, just them and their looks and smiles. That would make me happy.

Yeah, the finale got to me for several reasons but Jate... Oh, I thought it was gone forever until I saw those looks, those pure JATE looks and I was like: hell yes, it's still there.

Thanks!! :D

eponine119 July 20 2009, 00:54:45 UTC

This is lovely. Very well done. I love the title, as well. :)

kellysparrow July 20 2009, 10:13:19 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm happy you liked it!

siluria July 31 2009, 20:54:29 UTC

I really like that you took them back to season 1, and the conversation between them (including the one you implied) was perfect :)

kellysparrow August 2 2009, 21:28:07 UTC

Thank you very much! I really long for the simpleness that was S1, everything was still so new, so fresh and simple, in a way at least :)