{ Jack/Sawyer; Your Hand Can Hold My Heart }

Jul 27, 2008 23:13

Title; Your Hand Can Hold My Heart
Pairing; Jack/Sawyer
Rating; Hard R
Words; 477
Disclaimer; I do not own them, I just like playing with them.
A/N; Written for Queen fosfomifira, who requested visual and Sawyer. It became smut, the start being a favourite 'visual' :)

Sawyer's arm sneaked around Jack's waist in the dark, warm and comforting. )

luau: 2008, fic: lost, jack/sawyer

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alemyrddin July 31 2008, 11:08:56 UTC
oh, wow! This was HOT!
I loved the great image of them on the beach, Jack in Sawyer's arms, and Sawyer talking sexy to Jack.
Great ficlet!

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kellysparrow July 31 2008, 11:14:51 UTC
Thank you very much! It's always been one of my favourite scenes: to see Jack and Sawyer just in each others arms, having sex ;)

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halfdutch September 17 2008, 07:22:21 UTC
Mmmm, very hot and sweet. Really enjoyed this. :)

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kellysparrow October 19 2008, 21:13:50 UTC
Hi there!

Sorry for the major delay in replying! Thanks for commenting and I'm glad you liked it! :D

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janie_tangerine October 19 2008, 18:12:02 UTC
Hi there, cleaning up the to-read list and horribly late to the party ;) I really, really liked this. It was way hot and you had some really excellent visuals here.

Sawyer felt alive when he was with Jack. He loved how he could make him feel whatever he wanted him to feel, how Sawyer himself could come just by seeing Jack coming, knowing it was him who'd done it. Jack turned his head and they were kissing.

Mmmmmh, you totally had me there ;)

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kellysparrow October 19 2008, 21:14:56 UTC
Wow, thanks a lot! I'm glad you thought the visuals worked well :)

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gottalovev October 28 2008, 13:24:53 UTC
I love how quiet this fic is, even with all of the touching and coming. they are comfortable and at peace with one another, clearly in love and in lust. great visuals, that is for sure!

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kellysparrow October 28 2008, 15:06:26 UTC
Thank you! I really miss them and the chemistry they had on screen, too. I'd love to see a Jack/Sawyer storyline somewhere in S5...

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