Comments | kellyrfineman: "I'd gladly move to Mexico"

kellyrfineman

"I'd gladly move to Mexico" - a triolet with my poetry sisters

Jul 04, 2019 20:32

It's the first Friday in the month of July (tomorrow), so I'm posting my poem written in tandem with my lovely poetry sisters. This month it's triolets, and they were supposed to be heat-related.

Here's mine:

"I'd gladly move to Mexico"I’d gladly move to Mexico ( Read more... )

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Comments 7

We are CLEARLY on the same wavelength... ext_5125453 July 5 2019, 02:59:31 UTC

A lovely country. Endless amazing food!
...way too hot (in some places).

ext_4183890 July 5 2019, 15:49:57 UTC

My sister and her husband live in Mexico for six months of the year. They are learning to speak Spanish even. I think that's the solution.

ext_3178165 July 5 2019, 16:12:12 UTC

I love how this packs such a layered punch -- has a message without being even the slightest big messagey -- and is still lyrical and lovey on its face....

ext_1200380 July 5 2019, 19:52:47 UTC

Ha! So many kinds of heat to escape from. This is a fun one, Kelly. I'll take the Mexican food and ocean, but I couldn't take the temps, for sure.

mlyearofreading July 6 2019, 13:15:41 UTC

So many kinds of heat in a move like that...
Well played!