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cloudscome April 8 2011, 21:13:15 UTC
Ooo this looks good! Thank you for coding all that space in the poems! I want that book!

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kellyrfineman April 8 2011, 21:49:47 UTC
The coding was a bitch, BUT the poems (and the book) are magnificent. You will adore it for sure, Andi - some of it may be stuff he read when we heard him at ALA. I can't remember well enough to be sure!

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tanita says: anonymous April 9 2011, 09:56:46 UTC
The Adoffs continually amaze me, and I hope quite sincerely that this book does win all those awards you think it should.

And WOW to the random letter spacing. It's evocative, and really works.

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Re: tanita says: kellyrfineman April 9 2011, 14:44:58 UTC
The way the text looks on the page threw me at first, but I got used to it. There are some that are shape poems that make sense to me - one about the Mississippi that is thin and winds down the page, another in the shape of a house, with wide-spaced words like smoke billowing out of where the stovepipe would be - and some where it's less obvious to me what the shape signifies, although it all must have meaning to Arnold. But I got used to the way he grouped words or phrases and/or emphasized them with his spacing, and it really does work.

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You're so dedicated... slatts April 9 2011, 12:19:34 UTC
...to the art form. BRAVO!

Looks like a good book!

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Re: You're so dedicated... kellyrfineman April 9 2011, 14:46:41 UTC
Oh the craziness of coding this post. On the page, all the right-hand margins line up for that first poem. I couldn't quite manage it, try as I might. The second poem is almost identical to how it appears in the book, however.

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