Comments | kellychambliss: FIC -- "Talk Dirt to Me" (Wilhelmina/Pomona)

kellychambliss

FIC -- "Talk Dirt to Me" (Wilhelmina/Pomona)

Jun 17, 2012 19:24

This fic is my June entry for

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fic: talk dirt to me, character: pomona sprout, daily deviant stories, harry potter fanfic (my stories), femmeslash -- hp, pairing: wilhelmina/pomona, character: wilhelmina grubbly-plank

Comments 7

tea_for_lupin June 18 2012, 03:43:12 UTC

Oh!! Lovely and unexpected. How beautiful these two women are with all their flesh and skin dirt and scents.

kellychambliss June 18 2012, 20:58:23 UTC

Thank you! Pomona and Wilhelmina are two of my favorite older HP women.

lifeasanamazon June 18 2012, 05:49:18 UTC

That's just lovely. Such a tender portrayal of two wonderful women.

kellychambliss June 18 2012, 21:00:27 UTC

Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad the tenderness came through.

mothwing June 19 2012, 19:43:49 UTC

I love the tenderness, the earthiness, the subtle complexity of their dynamic- just perfect for these two!

kellychambliss June 19 2012, 21:31:00 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it! I found it very comforting to write these two.

miss_morland June 28 2012, 12:20:29 UTC

Delightful! I love this take on the "dirty talk" theme, and I love the way you've portrayed these two -- so tender and comfortable, and with a deep sense of companionship between them.

That said, I also like that the ending suggests that they aren't a 100 % match in every conceivable way (cf. Pomona's wish to touch Wilhelmina and the latter's reluctance). It's a nice touch of realism in that it shows that even people who are seemingy perfect together may need to negotiate things in order to keep a relationship working.