Comments | kelles: Flyers fic

kelles

Flyers fic

Nov 28, 2008 01:37

I finally finished the Flyers one-shot I've been working on for the past few days. I swear. Why can't I write anything short??? Seriously. This is a a one-sot. A 10 page one-shot.

Title: Welcome to the NHL
Characters/Pairings: Scottie Upshall/Claude Giroux
Other Pairings: Mike Richards/Jeff Carter, implied Scottie Upshall/Joffrey Lupul
Rating: NC- ( Read more... )

scottie upshall, slash, flyers slash, fics, claude giroux

Comments 11

frala November 28 2008, 07:24:28 UTC

so much delicious banter! and delicious sex too :D

kelles November 28 2008, 16:48:17 UTC

Thanks so much for your lovely comment :-)
It's funny I think dialogue and sex is what I write best. Not sure if that's a good thing or not. Writing plot/action not so easy for me.

frala November 29 2008, 07:22:02 UTC

good dialogue is damn hard! so be glad for that :D

tinydancermags November 28 2008, 08:03:08 UTC

Oh. My. God. SCOTTIE'S CORRUPTING THE ROOKIES!!! Lol. I love the rookies. I think I giggled through nearly this entire thing. :) Loved this so much. Claude is all kinds of yum. :) And I was happy to see Mike/Jeff make an appearance. I've missed them. :)

And I'm still in the process of finishing my story. Well, actually, I finished it once, but while I was editing it, I decided that the second half of it sucked so I deleted it and started over. I am determined to finish it tonight though, so it should be up tomorrow (today?) sometime. :)

kelles November 28 2008, 16:53:03 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it. I love the rookies too and I'm sure Scottie would love to corrupt them. I could never bring myself to write Scottie & Luca because Luca is just too innocent looking. Claude looks like he could be a little bit naughty. I'm glad I'm spreading the love for Claude. I really came to like him going to training camp this year. I think next year with him and JVR being on the team, it really could be the Flyers year to win the cup. This year it could happen too but something tells me it won't.

I can't wait to read your story (though read about your PC problems on your post WTF???). I'll be checking 2mins today until I go to the game.

tinydancermags November 28 2008, 19:50:33 UTC

Oddly enough, I've been wanting to write Sbisa like crazy, I just haven't been able to come up with a solid plot line for it. I agree, Scottie would be a little much for the baby, lol.

Yeah, I'm not expecting the cup this year, especially not after the Phils won. I think the city would implode from the excitement! But I'm willing to wait until next season. :)

I'm almost done with the story, but I keep getting distracted by the game, lol. Ooo, and now Chase Utley is on my screen. Can we teach Chase to play hockey? He's yummy, he'll fit right in...

Anyway, if I don't get the story up before you go to the game, it will definitely be waiting for you when you get home, I promise! Have fun! :)

kjameson November 28 2008, 12:00:17 UTC

Aww, I like this this. Very well done. I can always appreciate a story where Scottie is such a slut LOL

And Lupes at the end...was that a little jealousy I head? Hmm...

Can't wait for the game tonight. Retro third Jerseys and maybe a Briere back on ice? The Jersey are a sure thing...I read it this morning. I can't wait to 'em all in the Jersey. They look really good.

kelles November 28 2008, 16:58:51 UTC

Thanks :-) I'm glad you liked it.
Scottie as the slut is too much fun to write.
Yes, Lupes was jealous and I think in a bad mood because he was hurting, horny, and Scottie was so far away.

It's funny originally the fic was going to be a threesome (because I love writing Scottie with Lupes) but I wanted it to be set during Claude's 1st game. After I researched it, I found out Lupes was on the IR so I had to change things up. I might do a sequel set during training camp this year...where Lupes meets Claude and the three of them have some fun. Damn, not another fic to write. My brain will just will not shut up.

I can't wait for the game this afternoon and then the Phantoms game tonight. The boys will look hot in their retro jerseys. Of course they look hot in anything.

korichan_212 November 28 2008, 17:24:45 UTC

Ah, this was awesome. Love corrupting the rookies. And I love Scottie being such a slut ♥.

Scottie always gets laid. It’s like the unwritten rule of the universe.
Yesssssssss. I laughed so much at this. It's also true :D

kelles November 28 2008, 17:55:35 UTC

Ha ha. I should figure out a family friendly version of that and make a sign. Hmm...how could I word that??? It is. I just got an idea for a sequel and shall be writing it too. Let's just say it involves Lupes ;-)

korichan_212 November 28 2008, 18:03:26 UTC

I would have no idea how to make a family friendly version of that.
And mmmm, Lupes ♥.