ominous words there... blindly hoping they aren't also meant for you readers. won't deny I'm feeling small and skittish finally starting this out. 'Cause I *know* you're going to break me in this story... My only concern is whether you'll put me back together again?
I can't promise not to break you in the course of this, but I will absolutely do my best to put you back together :) I had to put myself back together ♥
You've built up the atmosphere wonderfully, with this lonely abandoned town. The contentment of the other residents - its frightening in itself. And that invisible limit that made Sam feel like he was in a snowglobe.
I like Sam's interactions with the Dean voice in his head. Trying to fix the truck, connecting him back to lessons over those months when Dean knew he was going to die. *shivers* And then you neatly diverted that energy with this: "A tip on where to start would be nice," Sam grumbles, but the Dean-in-his-head either can't hear or is too busy laughing.
It's hard to see someone so settled, so resigned, when all Sam wants is OUT OUT OUT! Definitely terrifying in its own way.
I'm glad Dean's voice made a difference compared to the desolation Sam's feeling -- I figured it would be tough for anyone reading to be without Dean for so long, and having his voice constantly leading Sam would be a great reminder that he's out there, somewhere...
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ominous words there... blindly hoping they aren't also meant for you readers. won't deny I'm feeling small and skittish finally starting this out. 'Cause I *know* you're going to break me in this story... My only concern is whether you'll put me back together again?
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I like Sam's interactions with the Dean voice in his head. Trying to fix the truck, connecting him back to lessons over those months when Dean knew he was going to die. *shivers* And then you neatly diverted that energy with this: "A tip on where to start would be nice," Sam grumbles, but the Dean-in-his-head either can't hear or is too busy laughing.
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I'm glad Dean's voice made a difference compared to the desolation Sam's feeling -- I figured it would be tough for anyone reading to be without Dean for so long, and having his voice constantly leading Sam would be a great reminder that he's out there, somewhere...
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