Comments | kelleigh: FIC: Never Will Run Smooth (Part Two)

kelleigh

FIC: Never Will Run Smooth (Part Two)

Sep 03, 2009 21:24

( Part Two. )

my fiction, jay squared, fic: challenges

Comments 121

elless18 September 4 2009, 05:36:17 UTC

That was awesome. I loved the flashbacks (seriously adorable!) and Jared and Jensen, but I especially loved that Chris didn't let Jensen get away with being an idiot. <3

kelleigh September 8 2009, 00:45:33 UTC

When the boys can't see sense for themselves, you always need a friend to smack it into them ;) I'm glad you liked the flashbacks too! Normally I can't write children to save my life, but this was actually fun. Thank you sooooo much!

anifsemaj September 4 2009, 05:50:42 UTC

Very nicely done! I love that they each were balancing the memory & the past with the new attraction in the present, and then discover they can have both.

kelleigh September 8 2009, 00:47:43 UTC

Eeeeep, thank you! ♥ Everyone has baggage they bring to a relationship, but in this strange case, their baggage was each other! I'm glad my brain let them have the happy ending =)

orphan_project September 4 2009, 05:58:24 UTC

This story was beautiful, and I feel that you executed it perfectly. It had the right balance of everything. <3 Fantastic job! :]

kelleigh September 8 2009, 00:49:30 UTC

Thank you so much! What an awesome compliment ;)

joans23 September 4 2009, 06:37:56 UTC

Cowabunga, dude!! There is nothing, NOTHING, I love better in this world than waking up to new Kelly fic. Read this all on the way to work this morning, and how can my day be anything but fabulous after that? It's GORGEOUS and sweet, with just the right amount of hurty goodness to make my heart sing. AMAZING JOB, I'm so glad you got it done in time!

♥ x billionty!!

kelleigh September 8 2009, 00:51:36 UTC

♥ ♥ What can I say? Your feedback always makes me feel warm and fuzzy. And that it made YOU feel warm and fuzzy is even better. I would never have finished this without your determination to finish your own fic, so THANK YOU. Now, at least for me, you little challenge crazy person, I can have my fic break and feel good about this story =)

dreamers_dh September 4 2009, 08:06:34 UTC

That was very sweet!
I love the idea behind it. The dream of the one perfect love.
Thank you for writing this!

kelleigh September 8 2009, 00:54:10 UTC

Thanks so much! ♥ A lot of people have their own dreams of a one true love, but unfortunately for these boys, the dream was holding them back from really seeing each other...until I made them come to their senses, of course ;)