Is That A Sword In Your Pocket? Part II

[kelleigh]

Comments

[earthquakedream]

I'm not sure which part I loved most about this - the crazy action, the hot j2 tension and sex, or Hardison and Eliot's awesome banter. This was just an AMAZING fic. I have so much love for you right now. <33

[kelleigh]

Hardison and Eliot are definitely *my* favorite part if it matters ;) Thank you SO much for enjoying it!

[cloex_brosluvr]

I really, really enjoyed this! And I love how you added Eliot & Hardison to the mix.

[kelleigh]

The three of them make perfect Musketeer-types, no? With a lot more sex and profanity, of course! Thanks so much :)

[alasse]

EEEEEEE!!! This was SO SO SO much fun, sweetie. God, what a RIDE! I loooooved the action, the humor, the political intrigue, and, GUUUH, Jared and Jensen. Eliot and Alec were totally awesome, too (MUST watch Leverage, seriously). This just flowed wonderfully, your writing was so dynamic and vivid. AWESOME!

[kelleigh]

Thank you! I thought it turned out pretty fun, too! ♥ Leverage is worth watching just for Alec and Eliot together, the boys do such a great job. Thanks again, hun!

[matalinolukaret]

EEEEE! IT'S UP! *dances*

I love that you put the pollen line. ;) I'm so happy about this! OH EVERYTHING. ♥

Oh, and I didn't catch this in my first run through, but this: It's a gorgeous sight, Jared's bare shoulders flexing and back undulating when his mouth closes over Jensen. He has to wind one hand through Jensen's hair, feeling the softness, using the other to support himself on the bed so he doesn't collapse backwards.

Is the bolded name supposed to be Jared?

[kelleigh]

God, you know when you read through something so many times you just can't see anymore? Sheesh, thanks!

As soon as I heard the pollen line, I HAD to add it, OMG. There's a couple true Leverage quotes in there, just too funny.

And you know what? I'm happy with this now too, I think all I needed was to post it and stop fretting. Cause really, the last two parts just made me so happy...

YOU'RE THE BEST, THANK YOU.

[one_2_3_4]

Haha, I squeed when I saw this posted and stayed up late to finish it. Lovelovelove it! You did awesome, the changes you made worked nicely and the updated version of it had me in stitches. I love Eliot and Hardison's bickering, so priceless. Great job, thank you so much for sharing!

[kelleigh]

Thank you! I'm glad it actually worked as an updated version instead of just being silly. I'm so glad I changed it from the original - the modern take fit so much better. Thanks for enjoying it ;)