My Favorite Holding Period Is Forever [J2 // NC-17 // 4K]

Dec 20, 2008 18:46

My Favorite Holding Period is Forever

Jensen/Jared. NC-17. 4,200 words. AU.

Jared is the hassled, yet eerily efficient assistant to Jensen Ackles who, let's face it, is ALL THAT (and a bag of chips). Second fic written to appease my Sharp Dressed Men kink. Not quite a PWP, but fairly close. More of a Porn-With-a-Point. Betaed by the lovely half_elf_lostRead more... )

suit kink, my fiction, jay squared, one-shot

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ms_soma December 21 2008, 00:37:28 UTC
what a great story! hehehe, love the office romance - poor Amber, she'll never get that top job while Jared's content in it!

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kelleigh December 21 2008, 22:58:03 UTC
Poor Amber, indeed. She's too busy being the snarky voice in my head to take over Jared's job, though...someday!

Thank you!

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nachekana December 21 2008, 00:41:05 UTC
That was pretty great! The fact that they were already together took me totally by surprise, well done!

I loved this paragraph:

The office is Jensen's domain. He's the boss, no questions asked. The house is Jared's. When he wants it, he leads, takes control. It's not about the control though, Jensen knows. Not about strength, payback, or power. Well, maybe a little. This is their balance. The circumstances of their relationship aren’t ideal, but this helps. Makes them fit that extra bit more.

And how it's a way for Jensen to make Jared more confident.

Thanks a lot for sharing!

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kelleigh December 21 2008, 22:58:59 UTC
I'm glad that surprised you! I didn't want it to be too obvious, so yay!

And that paragraph, interestingly enough, was the *first* paragraph of the story I wrote. Like, the concept the entire story was borne from...

Thanks for reading =)

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z3s_keep_going December 21 2008, 00:56:53 UTC
oooh love this ;D i wasn't expecting them to already be in a relationship ;D

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kelleigh December 21 2008, 22:59:29 UTC
I'm so glad you were surprised =) Thanks so much for the comment!

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kelleigh December 21 2008, 22:59:42 UTC
Thank you!

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elless18 December 21 2008, 01:02:40 UTC
That was really amazing. I loved the contrast between Jared's relationship with Mr. Ackles and his relationship with Jensen. Awesome.

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kelleigh December 21 2008, 23:44:11 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! I loved writing this piece of their relationship - thank you =)

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