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kelinswriterfic

Journey's End 1/1, NC-17

Oct 11, 2009 21:40

Pairing: Olivia/Natalia, Guiding Light; Canon to 9/10/09
Original Post Date: September 13, 2009
Original Post Location: Passion PerfectSummary: What happened when the moving crew left - aka my imagination of what the Friday 9/11/09 episode of Guiding Light could have been had there been a Friday episode (and a backbone ( Read more... )

olivia spencer, otalia, natalia rivera

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bsofthewest October 12 2009, 20:53:50 UTC

It is wonderful over here, too. It's everything you wanted it to be.
I loved it when Olivia called her sweetheart....that melted me!

kelinswriter October 12 2009, 21:28:59 UTC

It melted me every time she did it for real on the show. Loved how those endearments started sneaking in the closer they got to the ending.

If only the ad-libbed kiss had managed to stay in... *sigh*

bsofthewest October 12 2009, 21:38:57 UTC

"If only the ad-libbed kiss had managed to stay in... *sigh*"

I've not had the good luck to see that...or is it apocryphal?

kelinswriter October 12 2009, 21:51:39 UTC

It happened. It just didn't make it to air.

Watch the abrupt cut away from the end of the scene where Rafe gets on the bus to depart for the army. It will annoy you greatly.

(I think there was another one as well though not quite sure where it occurred.)

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kelinswriter December 20 2009, 22:06:25 UTC

Hey! Thanks for reading.

Yeah, I miss them too. Though they're going to be running my life til at least next spring with the giant fic they're forcing me to write. Not that I'm complaining! ;-)