Comments | kele_varekai: Shh

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Shh

Dec 22, 2007 19:42

Title: Shh
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Mark/Addison
Summary: I spent twenty minutes trying to concoct a summary that accurately represented the content of the story and came up with nothing because, actually, nothing normally worthy of summary-placement happens in this. It’s just a few hours in their life without context because, really, context is ( Read more... )

fandom:grey's anatomy, genre:porn, genre:fluff, admin:personal favorite, pairing:grey's:mark/addison

Comments 25

stickypearls December 23 2007, 01:17:36 UTC

Towel!Mark. And very detailed but loving porn. This was a nice read.

With his finger, he writes a backward I love you on the glass wall and smiles I spent the entire afternoon playing with a puppy, and I don't think I can afford for my heart to melt anymore. But. That line did it for me.

And the sex was very hot and the post-sex banter was adorable and very them and sigh. I miss them when they're all functional and happy together. Great job.

openended December 23 2007, 23:21:15 UTC

♥ Thank you, Calla.

toughlovebaby December 23 2007, 02:36:27 UTC

ooh i love that frou frou song :) nice choice!!!
oooh towel!mark. :) niiiiiice.
nicely done. i miss seeing maddison on my screen :(

openended December 23 2007, 23:21:52 UTC

It's amazing. I have it blasting in my car all the time.

purplpassn December 23 2007, 03:02:35 UTC

My parents are really pissing me off and on top of that decided to rearrange the entire house 2 days before Christmas and I'm tired but I'll stay up till 3 anyway which sucks because my friends from high school thought it would be a really great idea to eat lunch at 11 am tomorrow and none of that is really a big deal and I need to shut the fuck up-- but yay, this put me in a good mood.

And really, my favorite part about this is that it's everyday, and nothing really extraordinary. I always enjoy the little details: her thinking about her contacts; the clock in the shower; and of course the shower/mirror writing was...I tried to come up with a better word than adorable but I got nothing. So, adorable it is.

Oh, and of course the sex was hot. [Someone please create a synonym for that so I can switch it up a little. On the bright side though, I made it through a comment without saying "love".]

openended December 23 2007, 23:22:35 UTC

*hugs**

I'm really kind of tired of the plot thing so I'm glad that the ordinary thing worked out well. :) Thank you so much.

solo_fan December 23 2007, 05:29:15 UTC

What I liked best about this was that it didn't need a plot explanation or summarization. It was just an intimate look at a few hours in the life of Mark and Addison sharing a functional, committed, and intimate relationship with each other. Compared to what Shonda gave us, as a Maddison fan, reading this was shear bliss. Great work!

openended December 23 2007, 23:24:19 UTC

If only they had been given a chance (whether to succeed or fail, just given a chance), right? Thank you. :)

salmon_scrubs December 23 2007, 07:04:01 UTC

My heart kind of melted when he wrote I love you on the glass. That is just TOO adorable!!

They had such potential and this was a nice window into what could have been.

openended December 23 2007, 23:25:04 UTC

:)

Thanks, love.

(And I suck so damn hard at commenting on your stuff lately. Insert excuses about real life.)

salmon_scrubs December 24 2007, 04:03:00 UTC

Hey, no worries. Sometimes real life just gets in the way of fandom. :)