Oh Sara that was wonderful. I love that Kylie ended up in complete remission (aha as if she wouldn't) and that Noah was considering OSU (I'm looking there too). You wrote this so well and while it's sad to see it end, it's just so wonderful the way that it ended. Nicely done Sara.
This was beautiful, Sara. I loved Rachel and your "A Good Start" kids and Juliet [insert the other 20-something kids here], but your "A Posteriori" kids are my absolute favorites. They're real and flawed and snarky and fit so perfectly with Mark and Addison. It was such an enjoyable read to witness how the boys handle(d) everything going on with their little sister, especially being weary of her with other boys (I loved the no offense, Dylan") and Noah questioning his choice of college for her.
I particularly loved the line about it taking so long for Addison and Mark to get some alone time, and that even though everything turned out crazy and different than they planned, everything still worked out reasonably in the end. ♥
Gah! Earlier today I was thinking about how I wanted you to update this fic, and now here it is! Beautiful, yet again.
Complete Remission
Be it a fictional character or not those are wonderful words for a person to hear.
The writing was wonderful. The flow was believable...going from 8th grade to college in a couple of pages would no doubt be hard, but you handled it wonderfully.
Awww... I was waiting for this! This was such a good ending OMGsh. I think I'm going to re read the entire story. All the way from the begining cause this was just amazing. I bet Kylie is beautifull... I mean come on look at her parents. Anyways. I'm so happy shes aive and well.
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I really didn't want to let this one go. *sniff*
Thanks, Mel.
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Well you did a good job with it, so. ♥
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This was beautiful, Sara. I loved Rachel and your "A Good Start" kids and Juliet [insert the other 20-something kids here], but your "A Posteriori" kids are my absolute favorites. They're real and flawed and snarky and fit so perfectly with Mark and Addison. It was such an enjoyable read to witness how the boys handle(d) everything going on with their little sister, especially being weary of her with other boys (I loved the no offense, Dylan") and Noah questioning his choice of college for her.
I particularly loved the line about it taking so long for Addison and Mark to get some alone time, and that even though everything turned out crazy and different than they planned, everything still worked out reasonably in the end. ♥
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Thank you so much, Calla.
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Beautiful, yet again.
Complete Remission
Be it a fictional character or not those are wonderful words for a person to hear.
The writing was wonderful. The flow was believable...going from 8th grade to college in a couple of pages would no doubt be hard, but you handled it wonderfully.
Yet again, sad to see another fic. end.
~Naaz
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Is there such a thing as a clean love triangle?
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ggreat fic.
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