Title: A Posteriori :: The Alchemist [11/12]
Rating: PG.
Summary: Hey, happiness! This one's shorter than the others. Complain about the length and I will shove my shoe so far up your ass...
A Posteriori :: Eppur Si Muove A Posteriori :: Feel Me Heaven A Posteriori :: Dreaming of Andromeda A Posteriori :: Dancing With Mephisto A Posteriori
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I really, thoroughly enjoyed this chapter.
I never saw Alex coming [I really think I need some sleep because I keep making that dirty], but that was such a nice plot twist. I am kind of obsessed with people from Seattle meeting Mark & Addison's kids years down the road.
I liked the flow of this chapter. Everything feels kind of choppy and disconnected but I guess that's how I imagine it would feel finding out about and going through something so ridiculously important...kind of like what do you say; words don't really cut it.
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Okay, so I definitely got this comment at 5:20 in the morning and my mind right to all those dirty places too. I think it would've gone there regardless of time, but you know what I'm getting at.
Thank you so much.
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Thanks!
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Great job!
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... but her attention keeps drifting to her children and just how damned lucky she is to have everything the way she does. She catches Mark’s eyes and he nods, thinking the exact same thing. I loved all of the family stuff at the end, but this line summed it all up very well. Lovely job :)
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Thank you, love.
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