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keldjinfae_moon

heroes: moving (1/7)

Dec 12, 2007 13:53

Title: "Fear Of the Future"
Author: kel_fish
Fandom: Heroes
Characters: Arthur/Angela, Peter
Rating: G (PG?)
Disclaimer: Heroes belongs to NBC, Kring, and others who aren't I.
Author's note: Written for the mission_insane prompt, "Broody." This story is the prologue to the Moving series.
Summary: Peter fears for his family.

( He wondered exactly how much trouble his family was in )

rating: pg, arthur, series: moving, peter, rating: g, angela, fanfiction, fandom: heroes

Comments 21

fabrisse December 12 2007, 22:15:14 UTC

I just want to hug Peter in this one. There's nothing worse than knowing you're being discussed behind closed doors.

It's good.

keldjinfae_moon December 12 2007, 22:18:19 UTC

There's nothing worse than knowing you're being discussed behind closed doors.

No kidding. I hate it. My parents used to do that to me and my younger sister, and I just wanted to burst through the door and scream that I could hear them. I think that, in this case, it's even worse for Peter because he doesn't know what they're saying about him.

It's good.

Thank you!

bettareader December 12 2007, 22:35:41 UTC

Fantastic yet again! Your talent just oozes onto these pages! I thought that you did an excellent job describing the visuals and emotional distress of what Peter is obviously going through. All the actions, and re-actions were necessary and completly in character. Calling Nathan then hanging up is so Peter. Well done!

keldjinfae_moon December 12 2007, 22:39:32 UTC

Your talent just oozes onto these pages!

Do you mean "onto the screen?" 'Cause this totally isn't paper, yo.

... necessary and completly in character.

Always a thrill to hear that. Yays to proper characterization!

bettareader December 12 2007, 22:46:12 UTC

Do you mean "onto the screen?"

Yeeees. Yes, I did. Though I was kind of meaning web-pages...screen works too.

keldjinfae_moon December 12 2007, 22:52:05 UTC

Yes, yes it does.

"Teardrop?!" What, are you saying you don't like my rendition of "Blue Christmas?" I demand that you stop playing that music and listen to me sing!

Thread 7

meli_64 December 13 2007, 00:56:58 UTC

Awww, poor Peter. He needs a Nathan hug. Great fic! :D

keldjinfae_moon December 13 2007, 01:30:27 UTC

Nathan hugs are the best hugs. Thank you again!

oh_mcgee December 13 2007, 08:08:42 UTC

Peter! Don't hang up! Talk to Nathan dammit, it will make you feel better!

keldjinfae_moon December 13 2007, 08:14:15 UTC

And provide us with subtext! Don't worry though; you know that Nathan totally came to see Peter in person.

thatwassarcasm December 14 2007, 00:15:01 UTC

AWESOME!

keldjinfae_moon December 14 2007, 00:38:15 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting!

bettareader December 14 2007, 00:39:21 UTC

Heh, heh, heh, heh.