Comments | kel_1970: Fic: Red Team vs. Blue Team (R)

kel_1970

Fic: Red Team vs. Blue Team (R)

Jul 15, 2012 18:01

Inspired by these pictures at jim_and_bones. Community locked due to need for age verification, so join up to see! In case you don't see the pictures: there's a red-toned one of Chris Pine firing a gun, and a blue-toned one of a highly-armed Karl Urban.

( Fic here... )

rating: r, fandom: aos, pairing: kirk/mccoy, fan: fanfiction

Comments 8

rogueangel1998 July 16 2012, 00:59:21 UTC

Oh I like this. Poor Bones to think he killed his love.

(Now I kinda want to see it where Jim and Bones have not admitted their feelings to each other and then have to deal with this situation, maybe with Jim shooting Bones? What do you say? Feel up to it?) :-)

RA

kel_1970 July 17 2012, 00:14:12 UTC

Ooooh that would be a fun piece to write. Not in the cards for me right now, though, as I'm finishing up another saga I kind of let slide when I did Catching Fire. Of course since I am a very diverse person the other story has nothing to do with firefighters is in a completely different fandom.

rogueangel1998 July 17 2012, 02:56:51 UTC

Well, I'm going to let the idea dangle...maybe it will catch your attention later.

As for your other story - it's in another fandom! You know Jim and Bones should take precedence. ;-)

Happy writing

RA

Sunday, July 15, 2012 livejournal July 16 2012, 01:14:58 UTC

User tkeylasunset referenced to your post from Sunday, July 15, 2012 saying: [...] Fan Fic: Slash - Completed posts Red Team vs. Blue Team [...]

sickbay23 July 16 2012, 04:25:17 UTC

I saw the pic at Jim and Bones, you made a amazing story about that pic. Bones makes a fine fighter, but nearly killing Jim, also when it's only a game, is something he can't deal with so easy. It's good thing that Jim is there for him and help him to forget all about this, what ever this will be ;)

kel_1970 July 17 2012, 00:14:32 UTC

Glad you enjoyed! Thanks!

fritz42 July 16 2012, 12:14:57 UTC

Fantastic representation of those pictures! (I hadn't even noticed the red and blue tints to the pictures.)

Poor Bones. No wonder he freaked out. Hell, I would've, too. Jim's responses back to Bones were so spot on, but I loved this one the best. It made me giggle:

"Good," Jim said. "If you can roll your eyes at me, I know you're okay."

This was a lovely way to start my day.

"T"

kel_1970 July 17 2012, 00:15:08 UTC

Thank you! I've been trying to write short one-shots, just to prove to myself that I can make something complete in less than 100,000 words...