It Started with A Bet [Chapter 8]

Apr 21, 2011 11:34


Title  : It Started with a Bet [Chapter 8]
Pairing  : Takaki/Daiki (main), Yabu/Inoo, Inoo/Hikaru
Rating  :  PG-13
Genre  :  Stupid!romance, failed!crack
Warning : huge failure, terrible English, short like Daichan and worst cliffhanger D;
Summary :  Everything started to turn out well. Or, did it?
A/N  : Written to comply miika_daiscent  ’s request. Another ( Read more... )

fanfiction, pairing : inoo/yabu, pairing : takaki/daiki, pairing : inoo/hikaru

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chii_mao_13 April 21 2011, 15:34:56 UTC
New chappie!!! XD
But all I can do tonight is just spot, and drop comment tomorrow.. T^T

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keiyuu_ruka April 21 2011, 16:11:43 UTC
that's alright, take your time oKei :3

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chii_mao_13 April 24 2011, 14:46:36 UTC
daiki is still act cold to takaki ne.. >.<
but takaki is so cute!!!! happy from seeing daiki's smile!!!! Kyaaa~ surely loves daiki ne...

“Yeah you aren’t, but it would be a different story if it happened to Inoo Kei. Am I wrong?”

“Okay you got the point this time!”
LOL!!! Yabu admitted that he's a pervert!!! XDDDD

here was a maid with neko-mimi band on the head. Awesomely cute indeed but he laughed his ass loud when he realized the guy was none other than Arioka Daiki, who was having a ‘romantic’ relationship with him since pass few weeks.
I'll let my wild imagination works this time... fufufufufu XD

*faints*

“Threesome!” Hikaru smirked, placing a soft kiss on Kei’s ear while his eyes kept looking at Kota firmly.
*faints again*

And wowwwwww
Daiki and Takaki watched the firework together!!!!! How sweet... >////<
Dang. He looks so adorable… Yuya though. Hesitated first, but in a brief minute he moved a hand to touch Daiki’s face, and it was enough to make the latter look at him. Another firework sparked on the sky, and its light ( ... )

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keiyuu_ruka April 24 2011, 15:24:21 UTC
you're back eev! XD
i'm really glad to see you pointed some parts, feels like my job paid off <33
and you fainted twice! lol

you've been addicted? O.O
my my..thank you so much!
this is the most failed fic i've ever made, too long time to update for each chapter >.<
anyway, thanks again ;3

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keiyuu_ruka April 22 2011, 02:33:45 UTC
don't bite your cellphone baka!! XD

kouchan isn't interesting with girls,
he just wants Kei, lol!!

hohooo...glad you like that :3
but....somehow you read my mind!! D;
*sulks*

uhn, i need to end this soon!
maybe 1-2 chap again~

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keiyuu_ruka April 22 2011, 03:18:42 UTC
whoaaa you have a big mouth to bite your room XDDD

yeah i planned it, but because you mentioned about that,
i'll change the idea.
what about stabbing yuya on the ribs :P

yes, 1 or 2 more to go..
this project, i started posting it around march last year..
the longest time project, i can't bear it anymore >.<

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kawaiinopink April 22 2011, 02:36:15 UTC
Daichan with neko-mimi band???
i can imagine that, Daichan so CUTE~~~ LOL

and you haven't put the revelation of the OT3 Rucchi...

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keiyuu_ruka April 22 2011, 03:20:42 UTC
yep, that's why Yuya drooled over him, and Kota spanked him lol

yea i haven't, i think i should make the tadaiki first then move to the ot3, hehe..
gomenne, i'm so blunt XDD

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kawaiinopink April 22 2011, 04:18:14 UTC
ah, you right...
taidaiki first then the OT3...

it's ok, rucchi ^^
i'm still hope this ot3 will have a happy ending...

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keiyuu_ruka April 22 2011, 12:32:21 UTC
i really think that i will make the side story of this ot3, that's why i subsided their part XDD
but i'm still unsure, if tadaiki moment is near the end already while the ot3 relationship haven't got the revelation, i'll write it for sure :3

lol, i'm really blunt about their relationship, really
i bug my own grave by putting them together XDD

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tayarisa April 24 2011, 20:16:08 UTC
I know I'm more that late but I wanted to comment.

Love this. I can imagine Daiki in a maid dress.
Yabu is so jealous right now. I really hope inoo can make his mind. (please chose yabu, please chose yabu, please choce yabu)

AND FINALLY daiki is falling for Takaki.
the kiss while watching the fireworks is so romantic.

I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

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keiyuu_ruka April 25 2011, 11:15:17 UTC
that's alrite, i'm welcoming all comments, either it's early or late XD

hohoo, daiki in maid-dress is shoooo cute right!
and i hope your chant can be heared by Inoo XDD

yes, please wait the next chapter ok?
even though it'll be a bit long time like this one.
i'm too slow, i know it =.=

btw, thanks for adding me, i've added you back ^^

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tayarisa April 25 2011, 20:14:08 UTC
Yeah , he should look very cute. (I want a picture :D)
I hope so too.

i'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter. :DDD
thanks for adding me.

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keiyuu_ruka April 26 2011, 11:22:25 UTC
lol, let's ask the picture to Yuya XD

never mind, InooBu lovers should be friend yo :D

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funny4ains April 25 2011, 16:59:31 UTC
lol at the threesome! i really can't choose between inoobu and hikanoo. :-< i felt sad for yabu here again. but then, of course threesome! HAHAHA

yay daiki is falling for takaki! <333 aww at the fireworks kiss! reminds me of maid-sama. :))

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keiyuu_ruka April 26 2011, 11:24:41 UTC
yea actually i feel bad too, and i dunno what's wrong with me D;

lol, yea ..
somehow Kaichou wa maid-sama inspired me to write this chapter XD

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