First entry fanfic

[keiyan_goshin]

Ok, I finaly have something to present, as a first entry and introduction. Don't expect Too much eer...i'm quite new to this fanfiction writing business (understatement!) Anway i hope it's not too bad lol I just hope i posted this thing corectly (doubtful)

Title: Unsavory midnight snack
Author: Keiyan (me…)

Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn
Pairings: (8018

Comments

[varyola]

Haha! I love that this all took place around a boiling vat of pudding XD. Poor Yamamoto just "had the tiger by the tail" throughout this entire piece. Very cute! I'm interested to see what you do with it. Congrats on your first fic!

[keiyan_goshin]

Thank you very much ^^ i'm glad you liked it! Oh the pudding lol in truth it's not something that would boil over, since it's supposed to be cooked with a very low flame
but i needed something to break the tension again, and that was it lol Worked out ok i think ^^ At first, i didn't think i'd take it further, but it's not fair too poor Yamamoto, so i'm already writing the sequel lol

[junny2smokey]

Hibari running?! that's like.. that's like surrender!!! Hibari would do no such thing! But great story! i can't wait to see how Yamamoto will react about the sudden out of character thing with Hibari!! And then does he know he has those feelings for Hibari or was it just a reaction??? Anyway awsome story, can't wait for update!!!

[keiyan_goshin]

I did put OOC (out of character) in the warnings to warn people of the risks in advance lol also, this kind of battle isn't one Hibari can win by using force (for once), as for Yamamoto all i can say is that while he'll surely take advantage of Hibari's strange reaction, the outcome of their little stand off is far from being decided. Thank you very much for your comment ^^ i'm glad you liked it! Update may take a while (sorry) but it will come eventually lol

[shiyaki_chan]

I liked the story and don't think, it's OOC (well, except the ending maybe... hm I think a confused Hibari would go into defensive(in his case agressive)mode and strike. Nya, but I really liked Yamamoto's characterization! It's fun, when he's not TOO oblivious and uhm 'herbivore', but somethimes serious and strong.

[keiyan_goshin]

Yes the 'ending' was meant to surprise everyone lol I hope i'll be able to, in some ways, get Hibari more into character, but considering what i had in mind, it won't be by much. Mind you, i was well aware i was straying from who the character really is, but maybe i'll get a chance to prove that someday. Yamamoto in not (not anymore anyway) a herbivore, in my opinion, I hope to make Hibari realize that. (even if it means going a little out of character once more, bear with me people XD) Thanks for commenting! Glad you liked it ^^

[keiyan_goshin]

lol I know I know ^^ the ending got everyone by surprise, but don't worry, it's not over yet, besides, a little unexpected behavior isn't That bad XD Yamamoto is so easy to write, especially compared to Hibari >.<; Thank you for commenting i'm glad you liked it ^^