[Fic] GW: Cigarettes & Smoke (2)

[keitn]

Fandom: Gundam Wing

Title: Cigarettes & Smoke (2)
Author: Keithan
Disclaimers: Gundam Wing and its characters belong to their respective owners.
Rating: PG
Words: ~1,100
Series: Cigarettes & Smoke is a series of unrelated short fics that deal with the common theme of cigarettes and smoke.
Characters: 4/1
Summary: How does a perfect soldier

Comments

[fruitsgrow]

I am in love with this series already. It is very subtle, and you take the style to just the right limit.

ngl, it was knee-jerk to nearly pass this over because "what? They'd never smoke." But it's actually really fitting, and you make it work; I think it's how infrequent they seem to smoke.

[keitn]

Thank you! I'm happy you didn't pass over this, I'll remember to put a disclaimer or note somewhere about it--it's really more of a literary device than anything else. I don't like smoking too, but it's fun to play with. :P Thank you for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[misanagi]

I really enjoyed both of these. You did a great job setting the mood and feel of each scene and more importantly the emotions involved in each of them. It was beautiful.

[keitn]

Thanks, mis. :) I'm glad it didn't disappoint from the last one.

[darthanne]

I really enjoyed this one too. It was very atmospheric from the bar and Heero's emotions. I particularly liked the last paragraph, that he lets Quatre lead him and finally starts to feel some peace.

[keitn]

To be honest, it was a bit tricky to place Heero in such a situation. :P Thank you again! I'm glad you enjoyed both of them.

[lil_1337]

That was beautiful. I really like the way they understand each other and feel that understanding without having to say it.

[keitn]

Thank you, glad you enjoyed them both. I really like the subtle trust and understanding between these two characters. :)

[bryonylj]

Aww. :) Even when Heero's vulnerable he's still got this directness to him which keeps him in character. And I do like getting to see Quatre take charge, haha! Just lovely, as always.

[keitn]

Thank you! I'm glad you think Heero's still in character. I was having second thoughts on how to present Heero in such a situation. And I actually like Quatre taking charge here. :) Thanks again!