[fic] Simple Things 18

[keire_ke]

Title: Simple Things 18
Rating: 16
Pairings: 39, 58
Genre: horror
Warnings: cannibalism is discussed, vampirism is in effect
Summary: People want simple things. Sanzo wants his efforts recognised. Goku wants a home. Hakkai wants his friends to clean up after themselves. Gojyo wants beer.

Author notes: This fic is sponsored by Twilight, enabled by moshesque

Comments

[ginnyvos]

The end? As in, the end end? GODS! O.O I- I- Wow. Wait. The END?
Maaaaaan... *whines* I'm kinda speechless right now :S

[keire_ke]

Yes it is. I don't wanna drag this unnecessarily into infinity, though I might write ficlets. Later. "My Life As A NotTeenaged Vampire".

Thanks for following all the way through! <3

[geri]

AWE shucks i love this chapter i have to reread it again!

My sweet goku is so darn delirious it isn't funny. Sanzo is a tooth faerie? And he mistakes a rabbit for a human being.

You don't say. And sitting on top of the mountain cliff side with just his pants on talking to himself looking at the sky and aeroplanes.

Yet he is still unmistakably goku some how through it all! Yeah for goku and sanzo. Now sanzo has to step up and teach goku all he needs to know about vampirism.

Ps: "Duke is to fruity and hakkai wins with his eyes cloed and hands tied behind his back as the King of Darkness" ergo sanzo is just the Prince of Darkness? you don't say.HAHAHA

[keire_ke]

:)

Yes, poor Goku would take time to have his mind straight. He is not used to having the sense of smell so strong it has a physical presence. :) Poor monkey.

They have a connection, Sanzo and Goku, they would work this out.

Snigger. It amused me. :>

[geri]

Perhaps you can be persuaded to do and epilogue for their happily ever after? Pretty pleasse?

[keire_ke]

:) I shall think about that.

[keire_ke]

Thank you! It was very fun to write, too!

It turned out a little happier than I thought it would (oddly, that didn't involve changing the events one bit). They will work this out soon enough and that's happy. :>

Thank you, once more! <3

[adena_kaiba]

Wow ! It's really the best ending EVER ! And, as always, there are so many lines I adored I don't know where to start XP (Goku's ramblings are just priceless, so cute, completely in character; whereas Hakkai's calmness is as astounding as ever)
Considering the rest of the fic, I'd never hoped the end would be that happy (but in the same time I'm so sad it's over...) In any case, thank you SO much !!!! (Would you mind if I friended you ? I wonder how come I haven't asked yet XP)

[keire_ke]

Thank you. ^_____^ This story had a definite ending from the start, and it worked so beautifully. <3 I love Goku being crazy. He's so adorable. Evil Hakkai is only too special.

I'm surprised it turned out this happy, because it did. In my head it was more bittersweet. :)

Yes, of course, friend away. :)