oh! i wanted to ask. im curious, do they have an established relationship in this fic? depending on if they do or not adds to the dynamic a bit. either way, its still amazing.
Thanks your comment above made me really happy. :D
When I wrote this I imagined that Kirk and Spock were in a place in there relationship with each other where they were on the edge of being something more and half the time acted like they were in a long term relationship with each other but that they hadn't gotten to the sex yet. So this was their first time actually. I hope that doesn't take way from your enjoyment of the fic, you can certainly read it as though they were already in an established relationship (and in someways it was). Since I don't specify, it really is readers choice. :)
I still like the story a whole lot, established relationship or no. I think if you read it as if they didn't have a previous relationship it also makes it an interesting story, because then you wonder what else led Kirk to be so...forward. Which makes Spock quite a bit less in control of his emiotions... Which can be an awesome thing! Having an established relationship, no matter how intimate, also answers that question and explains Spock's willingness to comply, so to speak.
Either way, they are wonderful ways to read the story, and the dynamic you have here, odd as it may be (weird I have to say that about a "Het" pairing... but... yeah.) you've handled very well. Kudos!
And apologies, when I get over being totally speechless, I sometimes have a lot to say. All good though. :)
I still can’t really get over writing ‘his clitoris’.
That brings up some interesting points, in my mind at least. I am somewhat involved in the transgender community and it only just now occurs to me, there's a fairly popular "shemale" fetish, or "chicks with dicks", whatever you want to call it, pre-op MTF...so it's not unheard of to see "her penis". So why isn't there an equivalent pre-op FTM fetish? I don't expect you to have an answer, I'm just writing my thoughts...
Nice fic, though. This is pretty hot.
As for mistakes, I did actually notice several typos. Just read carefully, there are a few misplaced words, apostrophes, that sort of thing.
I don't expect you to have an answer, I'm just writing my thoughts...
That's good because that's a hard question to answer, but it does make a person think. In relation to my fic I think I would have felt just the same if I was writing the same story situation with female characters. Because in my mind the character sees themselves as still male or female. Jim Kirk was still male but his body was female so it was felt like a dichotomy to write “his clitoris”. I don't know if I'm making sense about this. Or maybe I'm over explaining things that don't need to be explained. :)
I'm glad you enjoyed the fic though. I think I'm too close to the fic still, to see the typos you're talking about, but I'll be sure to do another re-read. I try doing that thing were you read the fic one line a time starting from the last line but by the time I get to the middle I end up just reading straight through. I do read it out loud though but I might just be correcting my mistakes as I see them in my head so I don't see them on paper.
Great story. It was good to stay with 'he', that keeps it very strange and fun. Thanks so much. So what about: "Next time. When we get your body back, next time." ?
So what about: ""Next time. When we get your body back, next time."" ?
Well originally I was going to leave it to the imagination but then you asked and a bunny ate my brain, so I've written it. It's not even really looked over yet because I just finished it, so it should be up in a day or two. :)
It probably wont be what you were expecting but hey maybe people will still like it. Here's a un-edited preview:
Kirk and Spock beam down to the temple of the Goddess on the planet, where Kirk precedes to charms the panties of the High Priestess till she gives him his cock back. Spock is surprised how arousing he finds the whole exchange, because Kirk might tease but he’s also making really clear that nothing is going to happen between him and the High Priestess
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im curious, do they have an established relationship in this fic? depending on if they do or not adds to the dynamic a bit. either way, its still amazing.
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When I wrote this I imagined that Kirk and Spock were in a place in there relationship with each other where they were on the edge of being something more and half the time acted like they were in a long term relationship with each other but that they hadn't gotten to the sex yet. So this was their first time actually. I hope that doesn't take way from your enjoyment of the fic, you can certainly read it as though they were already in an established relationship (and in someways it was). Since I don't specify, it really is readers choice. :)
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Having an established relationship, no matter how intimate, also answers that question and explains Spock's willingness to comply, so to speak.
Either way, they are wonderful ways to read the story, and the dynamic you have here, odd as it may be (weird I have to say that about a "Het" pairing... but... yeah.) you've handled very well. Kudos!
And apologies, when I get over being totally speechless, I sometimes have a lot to say. All good though. :)
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That brings up some interesting points, in my mind at least. I am somewhat involved in the transgender community and it only just now occurs to me, there's a fairly popular "shemale" fetish, or "chicks with dicks", whatever you want to call it, pre-op MTF...so it's not unheard of to see "her penis". So why isn't there an equivalent pre-op FTM fetish? I don't expect you to have an answer, I'm just writing my thoughts...
Nice fic, though. This is pretty hot.
As for mistakes, I did actually notice several typos. Just read carefully, there are a few misplaced words, apostrophes, that sort of thing.
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That's good because that's a hard question to answer, but it does make a person think. In relation to my fic I think I would have felt just the same if I was writing the same story situation with female characters. Because in my mind the character sees themselves as still male or female. Jim Kirk was still male but his body was female so it was felt like a dichotomy to write “his clitoris”. I don't know if I'm making sense about this. Or maybe I'm over explaining things that don't need to be explained. :)
I'm glad you enjoyed the fic though. I think I'm too close to the fic still, to see the typos you're talking about, but I'll be sure to do another re-read. I try doing that thing were you read the fic one line a time starting from the last line but by the time I get to the middle I end up just reading straight through. I do read it out loud though but I might just be correcting my mistakes as I see them in my head so I don't see them on paper.
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So what about: "Next time. When we get your body back, next time." ?
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So what about: ""Next time. When we get your body back, next time."" ?
Well originally I was going to leave it to the imagination but then you asked and a bunny ate my brain, so I've written it. It's not even really looked over yet because I just finished it, so it should be up in a day or two. :)
It probably wont be what you were expecting but hey maybe people will still like it. Here's a un-edited preview:
Kirk and Spock beam down to the temple of the Goddess on the planet, where Kirk precedes to charms the panties of the High Priestess till she gives him his cock back. Spock is surprised how arousing he finds the whole exchange, because Kirk might tease but he’s also making really clear that nothing is going to happen between him and the High Priestess ( ... )
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Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you like it. ^_^
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