Comments | keerawa: dS snippet: "Inescapable Realities"

keerawa

dS snippet: "Inescapable Realities"

Apr 03, 2009 18:35

Fandom/Pairing: Due South; Fraser/Kowalski
Rating: PG
Length: 279 words
Challenge: Written for ds_snippets Amnesty challenge #21, prompt: window, jump, wait
Notes: Thanks to my beta, isiscolo.
Warnings: If you require them, don't read this one.
Summary: Just another morning up in the NWT.

( Inescapable Realities )

snippet, due south, fic

Comments 41

luzula April 4 2009, 08:04:28 UTC

Oh, that hurts so good. Ray asking him to stay just a little longer. Oh god, and then "Were you having a bad dream?" And then Ray turns on the radio, so it won't be silent. Ow.

keerawa April 4 2009, 08:43:48 UTC

Yeah, the radio. *sobs*

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keerawa April 5 2009, 07:53:22 UTC

Thanks, miss_zedem. *offers a handkerchief*

caersmane April 4 2009, 15:10:18 UTC

*reaches for the tissues* *sniffs* So well done.

keerawa April 5 2009, 07:53:42 UTC

*hugs* Thanks caersmane.

love_jackianto April 4 2009, 15:51:42 UTC

Wonderfully sad story. I loved the subtlety.

keerawa April 5 2009, 07:55:12 UTC

Thank you for reading, love_jackianto.

thady April 4 2009, 19:01:18 UTC

Oh, oh, this hurts. I love the subtlety of this, and how it hit me so much harder this way.

keerawa April 5 2009, 07:55:44 UTC

It sort of ... makes you an accomplice in your own pain. *hugs*