Comments | keerawa: dS snippet: "Containment Breach"

keerawa

dS snippet: "Containment Breach"

Mar 20, 2009 23:22

Fandom; Characters: due South; Detective Jack Huey
Rating: PG
Word Count: 300
Challenge: Written for the ds_snippets Zombie Challenge #105, prompt: wail
Author's Notes: Written for akamine_chan, because she begs so prettily. Thanks to my betas, js_cavalcante and Steven.
Summary: 'Asylum' meets the zombie apocalypse. Not cheerful.

( Containment Breach )

snippet, due south, fic

Comments 26

malnpudl March 21 2009, 18:27:56 UTC

Oh, my heart! You broke it so beautifully.

You are, indeed, a master of the snippet form. Wow.

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keerawa March 22 2009, 00:04:56 UTC

*attempts to decipher text-face* Is that a yikes?

akamine_chan March 22 2009, 12:33:34 UTC

His voice was tainted with a strange, dangerous laughter.

I love that line so, so much. It shows that Fraser's on the verge of breaking...

This was wonderful, keerawa. Thanks for indulging my zombie!craving...

keerawa March 23 2009, 05:46:41 UTC

Thanks, aka. It's not terribly subtle, but I think it works.

plotbunniofdoom March 27 2009, 23:52:57 UTC

Oh, I really like this.

keerawa March 28 2009, 06:03:03 UTC

Thanks for letting me know, plotbunnyofdoom!

plotbunniofdoom May 8 2009, 23:41:47 UTC

Just re-read this from the rec-fest thinger and, OH Fraser! :(

*heart breaks a little*

keerawa May 9 2009, 03:13:53 UTC

*nods* Definite Not-Happy Ending, this one. Thanks for letting me know you came back for a reread, jo!

themadlurker May 2 2009, 20:40:31 UTC

gwah. Okay, that works way too well. Very, very chilling.

keerawa May 4 2009, 06:38:15 UTC

*smiles grimly* It still creeps me out, I have to say. Thank you for the feedback, madlurker!