dS snippet: "The Wrong Side of the Tracks"

Mar 08, 2009 12:15

Fandom; Characters: due South; RayK and Fraser
Rating: PG
Word Count: 299
Challenge: Written for the ds_snippets Challenge #103, prompt: railroad
Author's Notes: Unbeta'd. Just needed to get them out of my head.

The Wrong Side of the Tracks )

snippet, due south, fic

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keerawa March 19 2009, 13:44:52 UTC
Thanks, aqua_eyes.

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luzula March 8 2009, 21:45:13 UTC
I love how Ray thinks this is an obvious fact of life. Not something he likes, but not news. And how it hits Fraser hard, even though it's something that should be obvious to him, too.

Great description of Fraser's speech as fast, precise and pissed-off. Also, the end really gets to me--Ray not wanting Fraser to lose that belief in Justice. They really bring out the best in each other here. Oh, Ray. And oh, Fraser, too.

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keerawa March 19 2009, 13:47:02 UTC
Poor Fraser thinks he's being offensive. After the week he's had, ferrying some rich and famous Candian lady around Chicago, he's just looking for someone to tell him he's wrong, they are making a difference. Thanks, luzula!

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keerawa March 19 2009, 13:47:42 UTC
Perfect icon!Thanks miss_zedem!

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nos4a2no9 March 8 2009, 23:40:30 UTC
*hugs poor Fraser, and Ray* Well done, Peaches. Well done indeed.

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keerawa March 19 2009, 13:48:28 UTC
Thank you, nos!

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lamentables March 9 2009, 07:52:54 UTC
That? Is love.
And honour.

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keerawa March 19 2009, 13:48:52 UTC
It is! Thanks, lamentables!

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