Fandom; Character: due South; Ray K
Rating: G
Word Count: 291
Challenge: Written for the
ds_snippets Complete Amnesty Challenge, prompt: gift
Author's Notes: Thanks to my beta,
luzula. None of these characters are mine. I just feed them when they follow me home.
(
A Very Merry Unbirthday )
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Poor Ray. And poor Frannie.
Also:
Fraser had turned his back and was neatly screening them from the room. Aware and protective Fraser is lovely.
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Protective of them AND Ray Vecchio. I'm still convinced that party in Eclipse is meant to establish Ray's cover.
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'Her voice and body language were almost perfect. You had to really look to see the sadness in Frannie’s eyes when she said, 'Happy birthday, Ray.'
I love the ending. I just want to give Frannie and Ray hugs
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I've always enjoyed the way RayK and Frannie actually do treat each other like siblings sometimes, including the times when they commiserate.
It's a small thing perhaps, but the idea that this is his coffee-maker that Frannie gave him, and that he'll remember that every time now, instead of thinking about Stella having the other one makes me happy.
Also, that she's got a new job lined up... heh heh! :)
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Like conspiracy theorists everywhere, I have to think that Frannies job at the 2-7 is meant to back up Ray's identity, just in case. I get a little tin hatty about this, because the undercover thing is so absurd that it needs a lot of support!
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