Challenge 3x10 - 5-7-5

Mar 06, 2020 21:22

4 Haikus, 2 Legends of Tomorrow, 2 non fandom.

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user: jacquelee, cycle 03, challenge 10

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devon380black March 7 2020, 07:08:05 UTC
Hello!

#2 is 4-7-5

You can still change it even after the deadline.

The first haiku is my fave.

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jacquelee March 7 2020, 07:16:15 UTC
You just gotta pronounce it a bit differently, instead of Encors, actually pronounce the e, as in Encoreeees. LOL (English is not my first language, and I saw someone else did this with their haikus too, so I thought it was okay to include different pronounciation). But if that's not okay, I'll come up with another one.

ETA: Okay, I mean, it was super easy to change so I just changed it, lol, no need for any discussion about the English language (though I think that would be still a fun discussion to have :P).

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devon380black March 7 2020, 07:34:00 UTC
It's okay. I'm still going to give it points because I read somewhere that haikus are not so rigid in the counting of syllables (something to do with the words not translating the same way from Japanese to English).

I just wanted to give you a chance to change the line if you want to in case someone else points it out.

P.S. I confess that I had to google the pronunciation of encores because maybe there was a way to say it differently.

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