Borderline Domestic

[keenrevel]

Jack and Liz have been living borderline domestic for a few months now. Every weekday, one of them always brings coffee for the other. Every weekend, one of them always rings the other to just talk.

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Friday Night is always movie night. This is partly because they both hate after-parties and partly because they are utterly

Comments

[stamatina_rae]

Ha! I totally lol'd at Jack loving all of Reagan's movies. And the kiss was so sweet. Very cute story :)

[keenrevel]

Thanks stamatina_rae. Thats a very high complement coming from you. :)

[michellek]

This was adorable.

[keenrevel]

Wow! Two comments coming from two awesome awesome writers? This cannot go any greater. :) lol Thanks michellek! Another high complement received. :)

[tinafeynatic]

Made of win!(: Super cute

[keenrevel]

Thanks tinafeynatic!! That's my first "made of win" comment. lol Hey, are you by any chance a member in the tina-fey.org forum? :)

[tinafeynatic]

Woot woot!(:
And yes, i am,
My user name is pookybear26

[keenrevel]

oh cool! Im a member of the forum as well. :) My name's kinrev. :)

[ams87]

Booshank, thanks for adding. I wanted to comment on this to say, CUTENESS :D

[keenrevel]

Thanks Ams! :) I wanna acknowledge you by saying 'booshank' is first heard from you by me. (wait, does that make sense? lol) :)

[ams87]

It sort've makes sense lulz.

[mindymakru]

This is lovely, you should write more!
I love the idea of Jack and Liz having movie nights and Liz knowing she can always get her way with Jack. You have a few slips in tenses (where 'was' should be 'is') but this is nicely-written and really enjoyable :D

[keenrevel]

Aw, thanks mindymakru! :) Yeah, I easily get confused with tenses. I'm writing one fic now but I'm making sure I don't commit any mistakes that's why it's taking so long. Thanks again for the positive feedback! :)