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kdsaj2

The Lines Between Love

Jun 22, 2010 13:30

“Devotion is a fragile thing when the thing you devoted your life into doesn’t know of your existence.”

Kibum read the line atop the cover of a book on a lonely stand as he made his way to the next train-the train that would take him to a single place he wants to be right now. The line made him chuckled darkly, oh irony. The station was empty as ( Read more... )

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midwest_loli June 22 2010, 21:02:05 UTC

D'awww, this is so cute! didn't get to comment on the others since i read all 3 in one go ^^;

anyways! i really liked how Jinki went after Key. Even though he's not sure of his own feelings, he still chases after Key! >w

cindyxmc June 23 2010, 02:38:20 UTC

TOO FAST, THEY GOT TOGETHER TOO FAST!
LOL BUT IT'S OKAY, AS LONG AS ONKEY IS TOGETHER, KEKE<3

crazyoverbishie June 23 2010, 03:51:33 UTC

SPOY!! ^^

ill eat first^^

crazyoverbishie June 23 2010, 04:15:57 UTC

i was hoping for more drama...XXDDD...but this was soooooo sweet and cute too...and OnKey is together..thats all the matter...XXDDD

i think ill re-read everything again..XD

pls do write more...ill be waiting for another pieces from you...^^

juphen June 23 2010, 04:26:40 UTC

awww....
so sweet jinki so sweet
but oh..jinki go straight forward, no dinner,or maybe 1st date? just go to the hotel nearby..omg *imagining something*
yeah i'm a bit pervert kekekekekeke

rinni1905 June 23 2010, 05:08:03 UTC

Uhm... Maybe it was too fast for Jinki to break up with his girlfriend, he was just confused about Kibum's leaving. I think it would be better to let this fic is longer and more descriptive of Jinki's feeling.

But it was good that he gave Kibum and himself a chance to be together. Kibum was so cute, that make me just want to hug him tightly. Anyway, I really enjoyed this. Thanks for writing this :)