LJ Idol Season 10 Topic 8: No Comment

Feb 09, 2017 17:05

“Okay, okay.” Sam exploded into the small, sterile room with a cocktail of anger and excitement - the former on account of the concessions he’d had to wrestle out of the Crown Prosecution Service and the latter because of the concessions he’d managed to wrestle out of the Crown Prosecution Service.  He knew he’d achieved the impossible, but also ( Read more... )

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rayaso February 11 2017, 00:13:26 UTC
That was an excellent turn on "no comment!" Usually, it's an evasion; here, it was more like a stick in the eye. This was a lot of fun.

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halfshellvenus February 11 2017, 22:07:56 UTC
I'm wondering whether manslaughter was really sufficient, given that Mr. Adams' head seemed to have become separated from his body.

At least she didn't stab Sam with the pen, which I hadn't put past her...

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sinnamongirl February 13 2017, 08:45:27 UTC
Big fun to see a Wodehouse comment, and you did a great job with the characters' personalities in a pretty short amount of time. Good job!

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murielle February 16 2017, 07:11:21 UTC
Love it! Great ending! Excellent use of the prompt! Bravo!

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baxaphobia February 16 2017, 15:51:20 UTC
Creat characters and a fun story!

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