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kazlynh

Fic - Broken - for 50ficlets

May 12, 2009 15:12

Title: Broken
Author: Kazlynh
Claim: Table 3/Ronon Dex
Prompt: #6 Beginning
Fandom:SGA
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1877
Beta: trishabooms
Summary: The aftermath of Sarif Sur haunts Ronon

Warning - overtones of self-harm

( It had been easy to hate them in the beginning... )

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Comments 13

lahela_sga May 12 2009, 15:24:12 UTC

Holy cow... That was just incredible. I'm speechless. *hugs*

kazlynh May 13 2009, 14:28:01 UTC

Thank you so much...

sharpiesgal May 12 2009, 16:40:15 UTC

Wow!

Amazingly powerful and painful.

Poor Ronon.

kazlynh May 13 2009, 14:28:33 UTC

Bless him. I sure he starts running when he sees me switching my laptop on...

nesmith May 12 2009, 17:47:55 UTC

That was really amazing. Fantastic read--I could see everything happening as I read, and you have the characters down so perfect I could hear them in my head.

Wonderful.

kazlynh May 13 2009, 14:29:44 UTC

Thank you.

I love being able to hear characters in my head when I read other people's stories, so your feedback means a lot!

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kazlynh May 13 2009, 14:30:14 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it

goddess47 May 13 2009, 00:08:26 UTC

Ouch.....

But nicely done!

kazlynh May 13 2009, 14:33:45 UTC

Thank you so much