Fic - Bowmore versus Jack - for 50ficlets

[kazlynh]

Title: Bowmore versus Jack
Author: Kazlynh
Claim: Table 3/Ronon Dex
Prompt: #5 Breakfast
Fandom:SGA
Rating: U
Word Count: 799

Summary: The morning after the night before

John Sheppard surfaced, reluctantly, from post-alcoholic sleep into the parched mouth, head-pounding torture of a hangover. He groaned softly, trying to remember who he had been

Comments

[renisanz]

Cute. I love the domesticity of Carson bringing them breakfast and meds for John. :)

[kazlynh]

He's such a sweetheart, really... And you know, I saw someone who looked just like him in a Starfleet uniform last night...

heehee

[renisanz]

Yeah, I had to actually see the movie to finally realize what you were talking about. ;) Just saw it tonight, and Paul McGillian was a pleasant surprise.

[treenahasthaal]

LOL! perfect little fic. The dialogue was fab, I could here the individual voices and accents! And I agree that John would be Solo! : )

[kazlynh]

Hehe! He would, wouldn't he...

There's a Star Wars/SGA crossover in there somewhere... I've just not got it right in my head yet...

[trishabooms]

I think I told you several times last night just how much I liked this, it bears repeating though.

Beautifully caught characters, wonderfully written into a believable situation.

I loved it.

[kazlynh]

Thank you, sweetie...

You say such lovely things *grin*

[freidlichkeit]

I've not read anything by you before, but after this I'm going to see what else you've done! This was hilarious and entirely in fitting with the characters.

You should write the Star Wars viewing party. I wonder if Ronon would like the fact that John always compares him to a hairy beast who can't speak...