Comments | kazimierzi: [Mother Keeper] Vol.1

kazimierzi

[Mother Keeper] Vol.1 - Ch.5

Oct 07, 2009 12:46

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dorothy_chan October 7 2009, 20:55:13 UTC

Thank you very much for your job!!! ♥ I adore your scanlations!! *--*

arunade October 7 2009, 21:18:19 UTC

Thank you for the release!!XD *excited for the start of vol 2~

jukebox_hero October 7 2009, 22:54:21 UTC

Thank you! *scurries off to read*

zaforgotten October 8 2009, 02:24:10 UTC

nothing beats waking up to see a new chp!
gokurosama kazi-san~

manaie October 8 2009, 03:36:58 UTC

Whoooooo~~!

And have fun at the con this weekend~!

manaie October 8 2009, 03:59:20 UTC

I don't know if you wanna be told this, but there's 2 mistakes in the typesetting~~ Nothing big.

AND OMG YOU WERE RIGHT. MAJOR MAJOR CLIFFHANGER.

kazimierzi October 8 2009, 18:15:39 UTC

I KNOW, RIGHT? MAJOR CLIFFHANGER * A*
if we're all lucky, i'll have the next chapter out by next week so i won't keep you guys hanging ;D ♥

oh, and really? thanks for spotting it! i'll go fix those two right now~
which pages are they, if you wouldn't mind telling me? 'cause knowing me, i'll end up missing it 8|;;

manaie October 9 2009, 03:30:53 UTC

wow-> now that i'm reading it over there's a few places that it's just.... awkward english The two I found the first time around are the underlined ones, the rest are mostly just phrasing or whatever (which may be intended if it's how they speak or something~~).

pg 152 -> should it be 'this is a decoy'?
pg 155 -> Syal switch places
pg156 -> those kinds of things
pg156/157 -> rebellion refers to a group of rebels who are rebelling. Wouldn't he then be a rebel? Or perhaps 'i'm part of the rebellion'
pg 165 -> even for a well-built guy, the gun is too much ( or even 'the gun is too much for even a well-built guy')
pg 166 -> 'plus you are 'heavy' enough.

Ffff- that's more than I expected~~