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mtgat April 1 2011, 15:05:13 UTC
This was very strange and non-linear but I liked it. :)

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kazbaby April 1 2011, 15:08:04 UTC
Strange and non-linear pretty much sums it up (bad habit of mine). Glad you liked it despite that. Thanks for reading. :D

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kernezelda April 2 2011, 01:39:05 UTC
Really creepy and sad, horrifying what-could-be! The circular format works very well.

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kazbaby April 2 2011, 02:26:28 UTC
The circular format works very well.

I was hoping that this would work for others as much as it did for me.

Thank you!

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mymatedave April 5 2011, 22:33:20 UTC
The strangeness and sadness of this au really works for me, I like it.

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kazbaby April 23 2011, 20:17:18 UTC
Thank you! I appreciate it a lot.

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jsfunction April 23 2011, 17:18:49 UTC
Wow, this is brilliant and very imaginative, I love it. I like the nonlinear storytelling choice too, fits this story perfectly.

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kazbaby April 23 2011, 20:19:10 UTC
This comment is what I woke up to this morning and so made for an excellent start to my day. I'm glad you found the nonlinear telling to fit as much as I do. Thank you so much!

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