One-shot Fic: Tomorrow

[kayson135]

Title: Tomorrow
Author: kayson135
Rating: PG-13 
Pairing: Merlin/Arthur
Spoilers/Warnings: Modern AU, some offensive language.
Word Count: ~3000
Disclaimer: I own nothing and am not affiliated with BBCs Merlin. No copyright infringement is intended. 
Summary: Arthur really wasn’t sure how they had ended up in this situation. He kept replaying the horrifying events

Comments

[gwylliondream]

Really nice job on this. Very visceral and realistic. I like the fact that you leave the next actions unwritten, by asserting that it is a one-shot. It makes it a lot more powerful than promising a second fluffy coda. This is an evocative look into relationships and how they evolve.

[kayson135]

Thank you so much! Your compliments are so sweet. I'm glad you liked it :)

[owensheart]

this was brilliant, I was so worried when the accident happened, my heart was in my throat.

Great work.

[kayson135]

Thank you! It's always nice to hear that writing evokes emotions. You're so sweet! I'm glad you liked it.

[rose_of_love]

By far the most realistic one-shot I have read of this fandom. So good, really lovely. :')

[kayson135]

Thank you so much, that is the highest praise! I'm so happy you liked it! :)

[archaeologist_d]

I liked how the argument had just spiraled out of control. Very emotional and felt very really. Great job.

[kayson135]

Thank you so much :) I'm glad you liked it.

[k_nightfox]

Angsty! I really like that you didn't tie up all the loose ends in a tidy package. It feels more real this way. These two definitely need to work on their communication skills but that's Arthur & Merlin in a nutshell. Thanks for this!

[kayson135]

Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Things aren't going to be perfect - they never are - they just have to keep moving forward and try. So happy you read and liked it! :)